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Deep in the caves of the silent hill was the palace of the demon king named Dehuntun
And it was no place for a good human to be cause not only were notorious thieves all over and the king had developed a recent interest in killing the human army force of knights. The king was in tension these days on how to kill the huge army of knights as they were full of flying griffins, swordsmen, angels, monks, bowmen, and they had the support of the farmers in blooming glade.
He wanted the terriotory of the knights because he had a idea in mind-
he wanted to take the territory so he had a more central place to rule and then he could close up and take the elven territory yellow lake.
Only problem was that if he defeated knight somehow he wud not have troops even enough to guard the castle.
He though had a plan, in the neighbouring area of seraphs tears lived the dreaded necromancer army. Now this necromancer army was just enogh to get the knights without losing much.
the demon king thought of pursuing a relationship with him to kill the knights but the king of necros was not a easy man to pursue with. so he decided of sending his best messengers the spwans to talk.
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The necromancer king stops him. He says “I know everything messenger, call your king I want to talk to him.' The scared spawn goes straight to Dehuntun and "OHH king I have got good news. The necromancer king is ready to meet you"
Nice work messenger is his reply.
Lets march down there the king orders his army chief the cave demon.
In the necromancer castle the necromancer king is making plans about what to talk about with Dehuntun.
When Dehuntun reaches he is offered gifts and then is taken to the king of necromancers.
“OH GREAT DEHUNTUN, YOU HAVE IMPRESSED ME THE KING ZOIROD BY YOUR PLAN BUT.................
THE ELVES HAVE BEEN TROUBLING ME, IT IS VITAL WE FINISH THEM TOO. SO WE SHALL ASK THE DARKELF KING FOR HELP. He is the brother of the elven king he may help us a lot” Starts Zoirod.“It will also minimize our losses.” Dehuntun already stupefied by the voice of Zoirod agrees absentmindedly. A messenging skeleton army marches to the dark elven kingdom. In the dark elf palace a spy arrives with all information about the happenings in the necromancer kingdom. “HAHAHAHA! So these donkeys think I don’t know anything. HMMM lets shock them by reaching their kingdoms.” Comes a voice from the mist of the misty coast. It was the dark elf king or I should say queen. She had killed the king and taken his place. And now she was going to the necromancer hideout. And……………………………………………............. |
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Chapter 3
Usually the border watchmen are sleeping and wont even get to know if a 100 ft rhino was staring them into their eyes but for once they were wide awake. All was calm when suddenly a border watch guard saw a huge army of dark elves approaching. Immidiately he rushed on his fastest horse to the palace and ran for the kings room and on the way he hit someone. Unfortunately that someone was the king and he was just about to withdraw his axe to kill but he jumped up and started his babble in excitement. “Oh lord its great news the dark elves are coming towards us, They have a peace sign to.” “Quick, arrange the army and elite skeletal dragons to ride on the fastest of them all.” “Yes sir”. This conversation was dictated to Dehunted while the skeletal dragons were arranged. In 30 minutes they were on the border and the 2 kings were surprised to see a beautiful woman. “OH necromancer and and demon kings I got your message and I want to talk to you in a private room” Her voice was crisp. The kings got her on a reserve skeletal dragon to the very room where the two had discussed earlier their plans. As soon as they went in the woman spoke “I am the new dark elf leader Soirol the king had been killed so I lead the dark elves. I am happy that you want my help on the work you want to do, but I have a bigger plan. Why don’t we kill the knights, wizards, dwarves and the elves. Then we will rule.” “That’s cool” screamed the two kings Dehunted and Zoirod. “But for that we will need the help of the barbarian king Borbodox.” “We will ask him for being our allies.” Said Zoirod. “ FOOL! THE COWARD WILL LEAK INFORMATION TO THE ENEMY. HE WILL JOIN THEM AND DESTROY US. WE MUST GIVE HIM NO WAY OUT DO YOU RATS UNDERSTAND.” “Then what do we do” said Dehunted. “Hmmm….. we threaten him. “WHAT?” asked Zoirod. “WE THREATEN FOOL. WE SEND A WAR LETTER, THE COWARD ASKS US PEACE HE WILL BEG US. The we take him in our team and LET THE WAR BEGIN……” The next day they sent the elitely fast rouges to the barbarian king. And what happened was just the same as the evil Soirol had thought. The king replied that he will do anything to avoid war. So the reply was that the evil trio wanted to meet him in his castle. The king agreed for a meeting as soon as possible. It is remarkable that all these talks happened within 2 days due to the elite speed of the rouges messengers. But now we are closing a mighty war and it looks like the other kings have no way out. Unless someone manages to spy but with the dark elf enchantress it was impossible. She was simply to smart. Only a miracle, and a miracle when the innocent kings didn’t know anything was impossible. |
If you think that the king of the land Barbolox was a complete loser you are wrong. When this guy was appointed king he had taken the evilest decision of all and also the bravest I would say. He banished all neutral creatures into the verdant dell prison. At that time the neutrals use to come and challenge hunters in fights. He really hated this but no one else as they took this as practice. When he was appointed king he thought that he must make a great decision so everyone would like him. But this decision was a disaster. The neutrals at that time were not united or it would have taken an hour to kill the barbarian army but united we stand divided they fell. But the other kings revolted and started asking the takebck of this decision. The barbarian king thought that the neutrals may revolt and kill him so he dismissed all allegation by inviting the dwarfs which were not being allowed in the land. This got his glory back and so all was calm. Now that the dwarves were nearly fully strenthegned (90%) he was thinking of how wrong this decision was when the whole dark elf army, demon army, and necromancer army entered. He quickly got up and called for celebrations but the beautiful queen soirol stopped him. “Lord Barbolox we shall not celebrate before victory Is ours.” “Who will stop us” roared Barbolox. “Who will stop us from killing the knights, wizards, elves and those stupid dwarves” “You will stop us if you roar like this” said the ever cautious Soirol. And 200 feet above on top of the clouds in the vast blue sky a flock of royal griffins were flying by and the thunder like voice of Barbolox had attracted them 150 feet lower well below the clouds. They were now spying on the barbarian castle listening to every single word. It might have taken hours but the griffins kept listening to the talks of the 4 evil leaders. Then they had a discussion. The chief said “We must fly at top speed to lord Koko.” “The other griffins whispered back a short yes and broke into a flight. Luck had befalled the griffins and Bad luck to the 4 evils. They went straight to the King KOKO. He was terrified he quickly sent the same flock to tell the elf, wizard and dwarf king. All kings rushed to the yellow lake the homeland of the knights. Their armys were ready but their strategy the most important was not. In the meeting all king had different ideas.
Here is what the kings said-
The wizard king said “WE shall not be scared and fight them” but the others thought they will lose a lot. And gain nothing but pain. Plus the dwarves were weak at that time so they had more chances of losing. The elves said that “WE shall pursue the King of all Barbolox” but it was decided that it shall remain a secret that they knew everything. The knights had the best idea. They thought that freeing the creatures of verdant dell will put an end to the barbarian king and the others shall stop this war. So it was decided that they send a army and free every locked neutral creature in verdant dell. |
| It’s a full moon night and if a merchant is passing by he is gonna be really scared seeing the vast army approaching the verdant dell. The army consists genies, giants, gargoyles, dwarven ursary, brawlers, berserkers, elven bowmen, treefolk, green dragons and heavens know what more. The guards of verdant dell who were snoring were not awakened instead the magi cast a spell of sleepiness on them so there was no chance of them getting up. All was silent and well planned and the only sounds were of the jail doors being unlocked by the lorekeepers. As the neutrals came out they started making noises. The wizard king Shooed them and started speaking. “We are here for a very noble reason,” We want you to take your revenge on the barbarian king and then go and live wherever you want.” There were blessing chants on them and then all neutral creatures ran at top speed towards the great capital. The barbarian king was murdered while he was dreaming and so were the rest of the barbarians. A bloodier fullmoon night would have never been witnessed in the history of the land. And to think about the war starting at sunrise the good kings were to sad that they were going to fight against their brothers and friends. Seeing the gloom the knight Koko spoke up “I don’t want to fight friends but alas….. I don’t see a way out except war.” “You know” said the dwarven king. “I wanted to enter the land as it was the holiest place in the world but there is something different I see. “It was the holiest dwarf” said the elf. “But after the death of its creator the empire it has been gloomy. I wish she could come back.” Suddenly a group of monk’s faces lightened up. “She can be brought back for a month but its extremely tough and would take a lot of time. We will need to fly to the heavens which will take us 5 years. We would have sat on the griffins and reached there in a month we cant go with ungodly creatures.” They said. “ And what if you fly with us” said the angels. “We forgot that we have angels. And with their power we could reach their even faster.” Said the head monk. Suddenly the camp got a bright glow. “Then it is decided” said king Koko “We will fight the till the angels and monks return with the empire. There was a loud YAYYYYYYYY! |
Chapter-6
So now it has parted into 2 groups and we will follow both.
On the land: The evil guys were shocked with the sudden death of the barbarian king and all barbarians. The dark elf was really angry “They went to verdant dell. They opened the prisons and let the neutrals out. But the main thing is they had spies somewhere or they would not have done that. I know they believe in non-violence. What do we do, what do we do” A spy entered. “I have got some news” “You don’t need to say anything” said the queen and killed him in anger. Then she decided of calling all her dark elves and testing them but how? Meanwhile the kings Dehuntun and Zoirod were talking, Dehuntun started “You know friend I think she is going to kill us next. First of all she thinks there are spies around. We will be the main suspect I am sure so we better run away. I already feel she has taken half our army so we better run away without any army and join the other side and provide them vital information.” “Then lets not wait lets run” Replied the necromancer. They ran down their own castle through secret passages and when they finally saw the grey sky it was 2 hours of continues running.
“OK now what we are in the great capital so how do we slip through to the yellow lake” was what Zoirod said. “We shall now take a small coach from here to the yellow lake” A coach like thing stopped in front of them. “Yellow lake you say” said an old man “come on”. They had slept asleep in a minute of going inside the coach and they waked up only in the yellow lake in the camp of the good people. Dehuntun got up and said “Did the old man leave us hear” “No” came the reply from behind the 2 turned and saw all 4 good kings standing. “That man was actually the dark elf king of before.” “So he was not dead” asked Zoirod. “Dead!” the wizard king Horton. “Not even hurt. Their were spies from the dark elf kingdom in your state demon they told everything to Soirol and the Dark elf king PROA. When they got to know this they made up a story, they acted the whole killing of the king thing and got you in their team. They wanted to get the whole land. When you left they told the king PROA and he disguised as the coachman and fainted you for a month.” Said a different voice and it stuck a huge bell in the 2 kings mind it was the empire. They bowed to her. “Then in 10 days the queen and king were killed by these superheroes and you were restored it was then that I came back to earth to restore your army the barbarian army the dark elf army and the necromancer army” she said to Dehuntun. Now I have to go back to heaven the rest details will be told to you by my great superheroes tomorrow morning. |
Chapter-7
The next morning the superheroes (good kings) were awoken early by Dehuntun and Zoirod. The two had not slept the whole night and who could after waking up from a 1 month slumber. They wanted more of what had happened. The elf king started sleepily, “The Empire first raised our army’s and then the barbarians who she was not happy we had killed from the shadows. She said a war on the land shall be open, and then enemy should know you were attacking. Then she raised yours and Dehuntun army. She hesitated but raised the dark elves to and left the queen and king dead. She scattered the neutrals so they could live happily. When she returned from doing that she looked worried.” “We asked her about what worried her” asked the dwarf king with a yawn. It had started to drizzle but no one minded it, the story was so interesting that even when they would have told it 1000 times to someone they would not have got bored. Back to the story The Empire replied “It is a tough answer and I think I am not allowed to tell you. There is an ancient rule that anyone who returns from to land must return in the time provided in your land visiting application. My application gave me 30 days as they knew it was serious. And I have lost 10 days. I need someone to take care of the land when I am absent. And I think I will need at least a group of 5. I have to tell them the secrets of the land and trust them to return it’s to its glory.” “That’s tough we had said” The kings said. “I want the record books of the land after I died.” “No one maintained them I replied” said Koko. “Then she told us to suggest 1 man or woman who was worth taking care of us and will learn quickly. We knew of a man called arctic who was the most honest, richest and knowledgeable man in the land. So the next day we brought him to the majesty. She was impressed and went with him to a secret place in the great capital which she told us later was the Hideout of the clan of administrators” Said the elf king. “He their received training for 18 days but after that we met empire asking if she would leave now as it was her last day of stay.” said Koko. She replied “Arctic is not fully ready. My application said after 35 days I will be pulled to hell forever so I will remain here for 5 more days” “Man, She died for us” said Dehuntun. “Yes!” said Zoirod who was calmer. They both were left crying for sometime as there was nothing new to tell them. Now arctic had the mission to pass his knowledge to 4 more worthwhile people and this man’s life had changed forever. He had to keep the land and its secrets alive and the empire suggested if they ever died the others should get to know the secrets. So with a sacrifice of his hand he made a bond with everyone and any child born will be bonded with him too. When he was dying he could send a man the secret location of a scroll consisting all secrets hide somewhere…… |
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Hows this title guys-
The great Land of the Lords
Part1- The Rise of the Empire |
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