Author | The tales of Silent Hill (feedback and discussion) |
Feedback for my story The tales of Silent Hill. please keep it short and (hopefully) sweet. :D
Feel free to point out the flaws, where I'm going wrong and right. :) |
Keep it going :-) . Though somehow the starting bears a striking resemblence to the story of Roran in Eragon . |
Whats Eragon? |
I've read Brisingr and thats where I got the inspiration for the names but I haven't read Eragon. |