| Author | The Unforeseen Queen |
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I met her in my coaching classes for entrance exams. She was very gorgeous and attractive. Most of the boys in our coaching liked her including me. My friends would often encourage me to go and talk to her. There was a test on every Sunday. As always I topped the batch but she scored terribly bad in her first test. She was new to the coaching. Our teacher told me to clear her doubts regarding that test and help her to improve.
I was pretty excited and nervous at the same time. My teacher had given me the job to help my crush. She was sitting in a classroom using her phone when I entered. She wore a black t-shirt and shorts. I introduced myself to her and she replied, “Hey, I’m Amara”. And that is how our friendship began. I cleared all her doubts and I was shocked because it didn’t even seem like she had doubts. She understood most of the questions without any problems and was giving all the answers by herself.
The same happened in the next test. She didn’t score good and I was supposed to make her understand the answer to the questions. She again tried to pretend as if she didn’t know about all those questions but I could easily tell that she knew answers to all of the questions. I was wondering why would someone perform bad on purpose when they have to potential to be a lot better.
It took a few more Sundays for me to gather up courage to ask for her number. But another strange coincidence happened that day, just before I was going to ask for her number she said, “Hey, Can I have your number please?”. And I was on the seventh heaven. So we began to talk, late in the nights, just random stuff from life. Then I asked the thing I was curious about. I said,” Why do you pretend to be a weak student when you’re a bright one?”. And she replied it makes me happy to pretend to be weak. I was shocked if the girl was crazy or something. |
We met the next day for coffee and then I asked her again, “How does pretending to be weak make you happy?”. She replied, “Actually I said that for fun. I don’t want my parents to know that I’m a bright student or something else they’ll get me to become an engineer or a doctor. And I don’t want to become any of that.” So I asked her what she wanted to become. She replied,” I just want my craziness take me wherever it does”. I wondered if the girl was too immature and stupid at the age to have such thoughts.
As I spent more time with her I understood that her intelligence is far beyond my understanding. She was not interested in the mere concepts of their present subjects but had a higher level of creative thinking. She didn’t indulge in any sport activities. She just spent hours watching videos on her different areas of interest on the web.
As the results of the final examination came, I cleared the exam with very good marks. But she was not able to pass because she didn’t want to. Her parents sent her to a hostel where she was made to study the subjects that appeared to boring to her all day. Exhausted by all of this she decided to escape from the hostel. She had some money she saved from a long time and got me to bring some other things that she needed. Then she left for some place that I even I had no idea about.
We constantly texted and I always asked if she’s okay or she needs anything. I also tried to ask several times where she is but she didn’t answer this question. Then gradually she stopped replying to my texts. We didn’t talk and there was no sign of her. After months her text came, ” I’ve done it. Its complete finally “. I wondered what is that she has done, she never told me about any project she was working with. I replied to her, “What have you finished?”. Suddenly a blue colored light appeared on the wall opposite to my bed. Amara came out of the light and I fainted. I woke up after 15 minutes as Amara was sprinkling water on my face.
Then she started explaining all of it to me. She had made a piece of technology that could teleport a mass up to 1000 kg to any location not more than 1 million km away. Shortly after that she left my place and instantly teleported to her home. It was around 2 years since Amara escaped her hostel and her parents had lost hope of finding. They were delighted to see their daughter back and were also proud of what she had done all by herself.
But she still wanted to improve her technology and show it to the world. She called me for coffee at the same place we used to hang out before. She told me that she had to leave. I didn’t want to miss the chance this time and wanted tell her that I loved her but I didn’t want her to stop following her dreams. I didn’t want to make her weak. I don’t know if she loved me or not but I didn’t have the courage to take the risk and stop her. |
She left for Argonne National Laboratory, Chicago. I was happy that she is so close to what she has ever wanted to become. I started focusing on my normal daily routine. Going to the normal job and missing her every day. We talked frequently because she was busy with her work. Years passed by and the frequency of our talks reduced. We would talk all day only on our birthdays. But this time on my birthday she didn’t call in the midnight. I was waiting in front of my phone all day. I tried calling her but her phone was switched off.
My friends were throwing a party for me so I went to the venue and I found out just a big empty hall with no decorations or lights. Suddenly everyone appeared around me in a circle. There were big lights and a band playing music in the corner. There was a very bright light right in front of me which slowly faded down. There I saw Amara sitting on her knee saying, “Will you marry me?”.
Amara had developed her technology to transfer a group of heavy mass into a temporary dimension for up to 30 minutes and that is what they used to surprised me. That is how the weak girl won my heart. Still I ask myself the question if there were not crazy people like her then how would we ever develop? |
Wow nice one :D
But a student who doesnt wanna get good marks , why is she coming to tuition then lmfao??
Plus why does she escapes hostel but never escaped tuition :??? |
But a student who doesnt wanna get good marks , why is she coming to tuition then lmfao??
Because her parents made her. They thought their child is a weak student which she pretended to be.
Plus why does she escapes hostel but never escaped tuition :???
People tolerate to a limit. No child simply escapes tuition because of a little bit of difficulties. But after going to hostel she understood that her parents would do anything to see her as they want, so her patience finally broke and decided to follow her dreams. |
why the title/
also where did u come up with the idea of teleportation.. |
why the title
No one expected the girl to do something so different and innovative. It is actually the most weird and craziest of us who do something new. So her crown of success was unforeseen.
also where did u come up with the idea of teleportation
I just keep writing and see whatever's fitting right next. I thought adding a technology will make the story interesting but then I had to make something not too fictional and something that is possible in near future. So teleportation came to my mind. :) |
Nice! Keep writing :)
Plus why does she escapes hostel but never escaped tuition :???
because she loved him. |
because she loved him.
Nice one :)
Never thought of it that way :D |
One more question....
We can probably see from the scenario that the kids are 15-15 years of age in beginning that is teens...
But i think there is hardly a GAP of 1 year when Amara proposes
So you wanna see they married at 16 years of age?
I will get you in jail :|
Child marriage is ILLEGAL!!! |
But i think there is hardly a GAP of 1 year when Amara proposes
Read it carefully - Years passed by
Looks like some of them are so desperate to find mistakes. |
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