| Author | Discussion: The Chronicles of Skunder |
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This thread is used for The Chronicles of Skunder thread in the 'Creative' forum. The story will be updated weekly or more often if I get the chance. The story is locked so the discussion can be held here.
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| why dont u write your own story not influenced by invents in the game |
2. What would you like me to write about? Pink ponies? =)
I figured I (as the Chronicler) would write a story about the game simply to keep things interesting and give people more than just the home page to read about in the game. Keep in mind this is just a creative story entry and thus not the 'official' work of the game or developers, but still, I hope to be able to draw out a pretty interesting story about the elves and eventually the rest of the factions in this game.
For those unaware of what I am referring to, see the home page or Forum Announcements for "The Imperial Chronicler" article. |
| uh pink ponies no idk something else and i am not vicious of a demon ;) am a a good demon |
I haven't read the story yet, but I plan to do so shortly.
But since the story in the Creative Works isn't "official", there's nothing stopping Skunder from writing short novels about various interesting things. (Perhaps we can look forward to some Harlequin-like shortstory about sry and XX2, the valentiners? Or perhaps something about a personal struggle to be a good demon, when all his friends are evil?)
Whatever Skunder writes, I'm sure it will be good. So keep up the good work, dear chronicler! |
I love your Work :D
It was wonderfully written and I can't wait to read more!
I find writing about the game a lot of fun! |
| Reading the story now :) Like it a lot, too, and looking forward to next part/chapter =) |
| Eagerly waiting for the next part of the story, very nice so far :) |
thx all. the next chapter will be coming in a few days at most.
so, how about a lil discussion about it? such as, has anyone noticed the foreshadowing line??? what's coming next, such and such? |
I have a question.
She sat in cold infinite darkness, some distance from the dim light provided by the fading embers of the fire.
Why did this line appear in the beginning and the ending? It doesn't seem to fit in the ending of the chapter. :S |
| finally someone asked the question. nice eye Kiz, but i won't explain until others add a bit to the discussion. =D |
For post 10:
I am thinking he did it because at the begaining of the story she was sitting at the fireplace reading and at the end she ended up sitting there after throwing the thingy (cant remember what it was called lol) into the fireplace and that is why?
maybe who knows? wait skunder does |
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I think it is a "flash back". |
She sat in cold infinite darkness, some distance from the dim light provided by the fading embers of the fire.
Why did this line appear in the beginning and the ending? It doesn't seem to fit in the ending of the chapter. :S
I think it's about that other person - her potential student:
"She closed her eyes, breathed in, and exhaled – with her thoughts intently focused on the last being she had been thinking of.
She sat in cold infinite darkness, some distance from the dim light provided by the fading embers of the fire." |
well the new addition is up...kinda put off...it didnt take it all in one post and got cut. =(
anyways, hope the new addition helps to clarify some questions from post 1. |
Second part was great! I was a bit surprised though to see myself appear in it already, to be honest. :)
It does help explain the finish of the first part now which was a bit vague then, although I'm curious as to why the name of the to-be keeper was left out...found that rather curious. So any specific reason or you just wanted it to be that way so the readers figure it out for themselves?
Looking forward to the next part! :D
well the new addition is up...kinda put off...it didnt take it all in one post and got cut. =(
You should use the character counter script from the ones Arctic posted on WG forums to avoid that. :P |
the enigmatic last line form chapter 1 is clear now!
the brother sister scene was quite realistic :)
also https://www.lordswm.com/pl_info.php?id=4391947 Family: Skunder (brother)
O_o
now we know the young elf ! |
now we know the young elf !
Aw you gave it away too quick :P |
aww Skunder, why do the demons always hafta be the bad guys??
:((( |
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I'm agree with you xerfer.. i hope we can find 'good' demon character or 'evil' elf... life's not just black or white, rite? ;p |
