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Nothing had I against you and friends,
But I will not try to make amends.
The problem is there is real life,
And you can't cut it with a knife.
I am not a poet nor will I be,
I just wanted you to see.
Your poem is good and I can't deny,
That the rules of this game I can't defy. | Time is such,
Some have plenty, some have brittle
For your praise, thank you very much,
And yes you are right, real life is very brittle.
But time will never be,
You just have to take the moment,
Enjoy your life and you will see,
Those moments you will never resent.
I'm not a sage to say this.
In face I'm just a kid,
But that fact just dismiss,
Because even sages won't call me stupid.
If you're not a poet well neither am I,
But your poems are awesome, I won't lie.
Only thing I'm wondering, why won't you try?
For one part I know you're not shy.
I know my idea is silly,
The result - I don't know what.
It might turn out to be good, really.
I guess it's worth a shot. | So we're back.
I had given up to be honest
But Naruto
just broke the rest.
No bitches,
no money for your poems
dont sell literature
just like you wont sell your moms.
Keep going
is all i wanna say
Ill come in
If it is a free day!
Oh and Welcomeback
Naruto its been a long time.
Keep playin,
When you are bored, you can rhyme. | k5 whatch that para 2
because thats a thing to say which is quite rude,
and u know what
its been quite some time
to get into this post
struggling without even a penny or dime
anyways new year is almost hear
with great cannons filled with joy or fear.
but anyways let me first wish you
happy christmas dears ;) | K5 although obscenely yet rightly said,
I must admit my idea was bad.
Festive season is here,
Santa is here, so are his deer.
Let's enjoy this time of the year,
Who knows if next time it would be freer.
Forget all worries, ignore all fuss.
It's time to celebrate.
Wishing everyone a Merry Christmas! | Naruto, I had nothing with you,
I didn't read your poem through,
The thing is something happened,
That I could have never imagined.
But better days are to come,
And lots are to be done.
This life lasts only a little while,
And we better wear a smile,
Though the days of rain and snow,
In the end will be a rainbow.
Well, Merry Christmas everyone,
Wish this was a day of sun,
But the rain is not so bad,
'Cause this time doesn't make you sad. | Where is everyone,
Where is all the fun?
Has every poetic rally done,
Shrunk to this mean "none"?
Let's continue mates,
Now perhaps with a topic,
Ignoring all the hates,
And the incoming of the Tropic. | I like to freestyle, flow, spit, all a.k.a. rap...just my style is from the mind. No script or pre-anything.
I usually just say what comes to mind, which, can uber suck sometimes but it is what it is and so...
I'll start and please...be uber judgemental (in a nice way, but if ya a G an wanna pm me its all good too.
eh ummm,
waters are shallow
chaseing after lifes shadow
deaths marrow tastin like simple sparrow
Vision narrow, quiver guided,
and can't deny ish
Partially public as public gets but lets not forget to get as public as you partially want it
Incubus it getting, partially let in but fully disruptin as otha's be fronting....eeh ehhh
Here is a lower form to prattle
I rap battle like kittens skit and skadadle
bloom flowers cuz I'm paid by da hour-ah
taste sour, yo check it, I gots da powa
do what cha do I do what I does
raps murda check wit da cuz
like rims then nice rims does
up dat cuz I raps like I does...........
Yuuuup! And I'm done,
time ta pass it on ta the next one | Yo Lucid how you doing,
Good you came this place was glooming.
I didn't really understand your lyrics,
But a rap sung on this will sure get many likes.
Explain your rap please,
This is not a tease.
Continue rapping don't cease,
Who knows whom you might appease.
I'm saying the same thing,
Notifications on this thread don't ring,
Why do I feel like I'm the king?
C'mon mates, give me something! | :P Oh this threads still alive
Thanks naruto for the rhymes.
ZZZ I hate ronaldo's dives
Even more than lucid limes.
Ughh that didnt make any sense.
My minds just too dense,
Ill make a come back be assured.
You just get ready to be floored. | You're welcome mate,
I'm sorry for being late.
Don't worry Lucid,
K5's being stupid :P
Don't let his insults make you tense,
Even what others are saying doesn't make any sense.
As for that, it is a fact,
We are rhyming without tact.
Now how about some topics, nice and deep?
Something in memories to keep?
Better write about lions and sheep,
Compared to beating the rice heap.
3 people won't be able to though,
So more people we need - Oh!
I invite all others, friend or foe,
In front of all those I bow. | Topics meh that defeats the purpose
Freestyling rocks any day.
Dont be shy or nervous,
rhyming shall make you gay. | I don't know why, this looks like a circus,
Probably because, there is no purpose!
Freestyling is cool, but what are we saying?
Get over it mate, what game are you playing? | The game is obvious
To me if not you
Just look at the title,
IT should give you a clue
Now I am stepping into this arena
Of poetry rock
Now won't we all see if ya
The truth can unlock
There is no purpose
to life or this game
except what you make it
They may be the same
For life is a puzzle
so hard to unwrap
But it all seems much clearer
in the heart of this rap
So listen my friends
To the truth that I know
nothing is simpler
When you go with the flow
No redrafts or edits
Just straight as I type
Just hoping that I don;t misclick
and WIPE
So now I must say
That the point of it all
Is to enjoy your self
And have a real ball
And if you;re still wondering
If there is anymore to do
The other answer
happens to be 42 | Welcome Lord MT,
This thread is no more empty.
Just to make sure,
It was this forum and not the game that needs cure ;)
Well it's nice to see,
Now there are more friends,
In a rally more enthusiastic people are the key,
I'm sure there'll be more poetry trends.
So how's it going mates?
Apart from all the love and hates? |
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