| Author | Shashwatme Vs Wiz_King |
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First post very well says it's about charachter image
That includes history, present, powers AND looks/costumes
dont get angry
i give u a second chance write another thing and we will be judged on that |
This is a difficult choice. Actually too difficult for me to pick a winner.
Post 2 is the kind of description that you would give when telling a blind what something looks like. There are some fancy words added but not much of a story behind it. I still like the language and look forward to reading one of his stories where he wouldn't feel as tied up to a description.
It is much more imagination and playfulness in post 8. Unfortunately, the lack of capitals and unorthodox use of punctuation makes my hair curl up. I think the spelling/grammar correction in for instance MS Word would help enough to make this text enjoyable. |
for stbs
Man i wrote a story earlier,
DIDNT YOU READ IT.
Only 2 guys didnt like it out opf 20 and those are-
wiz_king
timekeeper |
ok wiz king.
In 2 hours i will be back on the same topic.
My second post shall be deleted as i didnt know exactly what the topic was.
Now that i now i will come back stronger. |
| IMHO you should both be given a second chance. This time Wiz_king should post first to make it more fair. |
| +1 to Shashwatme |
OK, how's this
Open up the competition to everyone and if you are lucky you won't get banned for flaring
P.S. Both have pretty bad grammar, spelling and punctuation soooooooooo
I vote for neither |
| i will create a new thread same topic 300 word this time only clothes and no history pure description lock this thread |
I was given the impression that we had to write about a dark elf image we see.
Ofcourse! No one would ask you to write
"The dark elves wear blue dresses. They have a yellow staff. The staff has a blue orb on it..." Man, you must be creative, its understood.
And man how can golden boots be made of dragons bloodd.
Author's licence, you know. Its his own idea, it dosen't need to always be true. |
its called poetic justice
i know the name doesnt sound right but its applicable to stories too |
just an advice to you guys
dont take it as an offence but pay due attention
what i am saying is that
you know.....
you guys are taking extreme boasting to another level ( you know a level empowered by the dragons' blood dipped in leviathan saliva stolen from the wings of whatsits? )
come on guys even if its a fight this is outrageous try write some thing more practical (like you know trying not to use extreme boasting empowered with the blood of dragns or whatsits)
i could belive this to be sensible if it were a description of individual artifacts but both of you have made inetrnational issues out of the DE costumes
not sarcasm or anything but try to write something more subtle
with your best interest at heart
- Igles |
If I may also add a something here, in the midst of this adult discussion: on the keyboard, at your right hand, above the 'shift'-key, there is this awesome tool at your disposal.
It somehow, magically, makes people actually read your text, instead of letting them think 'TL;DR'.
Enter: the paragraph.
(That last pun was not intended, but very satisfying once noted. I astonished myself and will boast about this in real life now.) |
In 2 hours i will be back on the same topic.
And that's the last words he said. Farewell ! |
since the both of you (WK and shash) are directly involved in this competition, why don't you let a neutral party (like any one of us) to set the criteria, format and topic for you instead? this way there is clarity and no wrong assumptions.
also, why don't you do a best of 3 instead of 1 off? at least there is a chance for redemption |
| Aaand kids' quarells have been resolved :P |
| As shashwatme was blocked by 'bow', I am closing this thread. |
| closed by Lord BrownBear (2012-07-18 11:33:28) |
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